A picture book

Walt: write for a younger audience.
Man my school is such a pain! They make me stay in at lunch just because i didn`t finish my work. Im going to leave earth because of school but i have to leave a note for my Mum cause she will worry about me and i almost forgot hi my name is STAR LORD.

I am now arriving at nasa space station woooooooow look at my spaceship. I jump in my spaceship and blasted off 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 blast off.

First stop mercury wow the surface is rocky and hard it is so hot thats because it is the first planet from the sun but this is not the planet for me NEXT PLANET.

Second stop Venus the second planet from the sun Venus is very very hot hotter then mercury that is why i wouldn`t wont to live on Venus NEXT PLANET.

I all ready know what earth is like so i don`t have to land there.

The 4th stop mars. Mars is called the red planet because it is red mars has a lot of mountains and craters but it has to much dust to see so i cant stay here. NEXT PLANET.

5th stop Jupiter. Jupiter is a gas giant and it is the biggest planet` so know one live on here if you step on Jupiter you will get sucked in to the middle of Jupiter then you will get crushed in to a ball. This is not a good planet for me and Jupiter has a giant storm that has bean going on for 4 billion years it is called the red spot. NEXT PLANET.

Now its Saturn. Saturn is another gas giant like Jupiter but Saturn is a little bit smaller and Saturn has a big ring around it and its made out of dust rock and ice so i cant live on here. NEXT PLANET.

The second to last planet Uranus. Uranus is the second coldest planet and the second to last planet from the sun that is why it is cold. Uranus is a ice giant and a big blue planet it is like Neptune but light blue. I don`t think you can live on it because it is to cold it will cover you in ice this is not the planet for me NEXT PLANET.

The very last planet Neptune the coldest planet of all time. Neptune is another ice giant like Uranus. Neptune is the bluest planet in the whole solar system. It is not good for me so i might go back to earth looks like it is back to boring school planet.

Im back on earth. Im gonna go see my mum i just arivved at my mums house and i can see her threw the window crying. Nock nock nock i walked in and she turn around to look at me and ran so fast at me she sqwished me punched me for leaving but she was so happy too see me again. Looks like earth was the best planet to live on. NOT A NEXT PLANET.

Task description: For this task i had to write about leaving earth finding a new planet to live on so i don`t have to go to school.