Friday, 21 October 2016

My Poem


  1. Kia ora Deniro,

    I loved your poem especially the Pitbull! I loved it because as I read your poem it made me feel bery frightning. I loved the adjectives in your poems. I also liked the poem about your monster. My favorite poem out of all the the poems is the pitbull because you used great words to the poem. Anyways keep up the good work and write more poems!

    From Amelia.

  2. Kia ora Deniro,

    i loved your poem it made sence it was so amazing keep up the hard work and i can not wait to see your new post