my weekend

Walt: make connections with what we read, and what we have read before.

On the weekends i went over to my nana`s house and got a haircut because my hair was to long. After that i went to my uncle`s and cousins house me and my cousin deejaye played on my uncle`s PS4 we played call of duty 3 i always win but when my uncle is playing he beats me and my cousin he is like a pro.

On sunday i had to go home because i had school and when i got home i played on my PS4 it was a little fun because the game i have is dumb. At school i play with my basket ball and my friends sometimes we play ball tag and sometimes we play boys againts girls the best player is my friend kurtas and my friend leonardy. It it fun as.

Task description: for this task i had to write about my weekend it was a very good weekend.

A picture book

Walt: write for a younger audience.
Man my school is such a pain! They make me stay in at lunch just because i didn`t finish my work. Im going to leave earth because of school but i have to leave a note for my Mum cause she will worry about me and i almost forgot hi my name is STAR LORD.

I am now arriving at nasa space station woooooooow look at my spaceship. I jump in my spaceship and blasted off 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 blast off.

First stop mercury wow the surface is rocky and hard it is so hot thats because it is the first planet from the sun but this is not the planet for me NEXT PLANET.

Second stop Venus the second planet from the sun Venus is very very hot hotter then mercury that is why i wouldn`t wont to live on Venus NEXT PLANET.

I all ready know what earth is like so i don`t have to land there.

The 4th stop mars. Mars is called the red planet because it is red mars has a lot of mountains and craters but it has to much dust to see so i cant stay here. NEXT PLANET.

5th stop Jupiter. Jupiter is a gas giant and it is the biggest planet` so know one live on here if you step on Jupiter you will get sucked in to the middle of Jupiter then you will get crushed in to a ball. This is not a good planet for me and Jupiter has a giant storm that has bean going on for 4 billion years it is called the red spot. NEXT PLANET.

Now its Saturn. Saturn is another gas giant like Jupiter but Saturn is a little bit smaller and Saturn has a big ring around it and its made out of dust rock and ice so i cant live on here. NEXT PLANET.

The second to last planet Uranus. Uranus is the second coldest planet and the second to last planet from the sun that is why it is cold. Uranus is a ice giant and a big blue planet it is like Neptune but light blue. I don`t think you can live on it because it is to cold it will cover you in ice this is not the planet for me NEXT PLANET.

The very last planet Neptune the coldest planet of all time. Neptune is another ice giant like Uranus. Neptune is the bluest planet in the whole solar system. It is not good for me so i might go back to earth looks like it is back to boring school planet.

Im back on earth. Im gonna go see my mum i just arivved at my mums house and i can see her threw the window crying. Nock nock nock i walked in and she turn around to look at me and ran so fast at me she sqwished me punched me for leaving but she was so happy too see me again. Looks like earth was the best planet to live on. NOT A NEXT PLANET.

Task description: For this task i had to write about leaving earth finding a new planet to live on so i don`t have to go to school.

My post card

Task description: For this task i had to make a post card to eny person i wont i chose my friend terry because he is nice to me.

Visiting your solar system

Task Description: For this task i had to talk about mercury Venus and aging.  

planets in the solar system

Walt: understand information collected from multiple sources. 

  Task description: For this task i had to put all the planets in the solar system in to order and try to make them look like they are in space.

Space narative

Walt: structure a narrative piece of writing. 

it is the year 4017 I am leaving planet earth to find another planet because earth is dying. know one is looking after the earth so me and my dog coba will find another better earth for us people. He is a protective dog so he can protect me from aliens. He can bite their legs off and He can also talk. I have packed a lot of water and food and rocket booster shoes. While i was driving my spaceship me and my dog spotted an unknown planet. It looked very strange so i landed on the planet but before i could step out of my spaceship a strange thing was standing in the dust. It was a big big alien! I put my rocket booster shoes on and blasted away with my dog coba it destroyed my spaceship and my bag was in it Gonna have to try to live. The alien was following me and my dog so i put my rocket booster shoes on high max speed. I blasted away so fast i couldn't see where i was going soon i slowed down then i spotted a big and wide tree. I was waiting for nothing so i was going to make a tree house. It will be great. I built a treehouse with branches from the tree`s and leafs for the roof it wasn't much but i just went with it. That day i wanted to go back to my spaceship so i can fix it and defeat the alien then tell everyone on earth that me and my dog coba have found a nice place to live. I put my rocket booster shoes on grabbed my rocket blaster gun and blasted away with my dog again. We are here at my spaceship and the alien is not here but out of know where the alien jumped out the dust i shot him with my gun it just made him weak for a little while i shot him again he dropped to the ground. I shot him one more time then his legs went straight off his body then he crawled away with only his arms. We will go back to earth and tell every one that we have found a better earth then live a happy life.   THE END  

task description: For this task i had to write about two characters leaving earth to find another planet to live on be earth is dying and pollution has taken over the earth.

My kayak

Walt: make connections with what we already know with what we read.

Step 2

Describe your design

I.e. “I have chosen a blue Slalom K1 kayak with a blue base and a red outline. I have chosen to place 5 yellow stars at the front of my kayak and a large triangle at the back.”

I chose slalom C1 because i like the look of it because  the colors i chose Red black green blue and yelow.  I put a fist on my boat and some triangles and a sqruare.

Step 3

Describe who would buy your design

I.e. “I believe this kayak would be liked by teachers who want to get into kayaking. The paintjob is simple, but still pretty cool looking.”

I would buy it because i like the paint job and it wont break unti someone reckes it.

My waka

Walt: make connections.

motat trip

Walt: think critically about texts

One day all the year 5s went on a trip to motat and two little boys went to the bathroom there names are De Niro and William. When they came out of the bath room there group was gone back to scqhool they were locked inside we slept in a little scary house with spider webs and spiders.

De Niro and william went to find food and water they found water but no food. ‘Man were never gonna find food’ said William ‘dont worry’ said De Niro look its almost day time so there gonna open the gates so we get out of this horrifiying motat.

That morning the gates opened and got out safly a happy ‘yaaaaaaaahoooooooo we made it’ said william ‘man i thought we had to stay there for ever’ said De Niro ‘ok back home now’ said William ‘yeah i geuss so’ said De Niro ‘by De Niro’ said William ‘by’ said De Niro.the end

My Poem

The Moon

Have you ever been in space well your gonna hear a story about space.

One dark and stormy night there was a 18 year old boy called De Niro he was a guy that always goes up into space to fix the satalight but one night the rocket ship broke down. He landed on the planet MOON. If you want to hear the full story click the link below.

Click me

De Niro's Olympic's Movie.

De Niro Olympic from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

The Olympic`s

Have Any of you heard that the Rio 2016 Olympic`s are starting today I`m so excited are you Excited.

To day is Friday the 5th of August Today the 2016 Rio Olympic`s Are you excited for it cause i am. I will be voting for Valerie Adams Because she won 3 gold medals two silvers and 1 barons For throwing the shot put so far. Valerie Adams Last would record was

pick a path

Walt: write multiple endings to a story.

Once upon a time there was a guy named fin that could see danger from far away And a dog named jake that could talk and smell danger from far away. Jake would always like to play card game`s with fin but fin would aways say no, fin would say no because jake would away`s win he only win`s because jake played it sint`s he was 5 so he would away`s win.

One day they both heard a big loud scream aaaaaaaaaaaa help us are house`s are is on fire ‘Dont worry we`ll help you right jake’ said fin ‘you go ahead i think i`ll stay here’ said jake tiredly ‘come on we have to save people’ said fin angry.

Decision 1: Jake get`s up and help`s fin

Decision 2: sit`s around here like a baby.

‘Find i`m coming but only for a little while’ said jake ‘Ok’ said fin ‘holy moly said fin and jake were gonna need bucket of water to that fire out a full bucket’ said jake.  

‘Ok so here`s the plan Jake you go and find some water to put the fire out i`ll save the people’ said fin ‘onit’ said jake LET`S DO THIS fin saves all the people and jake was just in time to put the fire out But when Jake almost threw all the water at the fire fin and jake heard a loud HELP I`M TRAPED said the last person in the fire ‘a oh’ said fin and jake ‘Hold on we`ll get you out right jake’ said fin.

Decision 1: Fin makes jake help him save the person.

Decision 2: jake helps him without fin making him help him.

‘Fin you save the person we`ll i get some more water there`s only half a bucket of water now’ said jake ‘ok’ said fin. ‘Hold on i`m coming’ said fin ‘ok’ said the person ‘got you now let`s get out of this fire’ said fin great just in time jake we needed that water wsssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhh the fire went out.

‘Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahoooooooooooooooooooooo fin and jake saved the day again’ said the little people thankyou fin and jake for puting out the fire and savind us but how are we gonna fix our house`s ‘Don`t worry all of you can live with me and jake thank you fin’ said one little person’ your we`ll come’ said fin and jake ‘Now let`s get some hot chocolate’ said fin ‘yeeeeeeaaaaaah’ said the little people.The End Task Description: If you wanna some exciting writing then simply go to my pick a path story.

Advice by De NIro

Walt: synthesise information from multiple sources

Task Description: If eneone needs advice come me De Niro Elliott i will give the advice ever.

we are the champions

End of blog posting

Hi my fans i have some good news and bad news the good news is i`m going on a holiday for two weeks and the bad news is i wont be blogging for two weeks. I might be posting and blogging in the holidays i hope you will find someone like me to blog post. Thats it for now see you`s in two weeks by.

A short story.

Walt: write a setting description.

Once upon a time there was a man called Dark King but his friends call him hunter. He lives in a mansion with a robot mate that helps him defeat crime makers. Boom crash bang ‘’what was that’’ said hunter ‘’it sounds like danger’’ said the robot It`s a poisonous snake’’ said Dark King ‘’robot you open the portal i`ll hold the snake off’’ said Dark king ‘’on it’’ said robot boom dark king hits the snake with an uppercut ‘’can't hold him off’’ said dark king ‘’oh no’’ said the robot.

Poof ‘’yaaaaaaaaay the portal opened’’ said robot. Boom bash smash kicked dark king and the robot kicked the snake into the portal ‘’now it's gone for sure’’ said dark king. ‘’Wait’’ said dark king robot where does that portal open too. Breaking news a big poisonous snake a just arrived a new York.’’ Ah o’’ said dark king and robot. The End.

Task Description: how i wrote this was i wrote about my art work and some other things like snakes robots portals and also poisonous snakes too.

the big bad scary wolf

Walt: understand perceptions.    Task Description: how i did this was i  chose the big bad wolf from the story the three little pigs. Then i drew the big bad wolf and put him on my wanted poster.

superhero story by deniro

Walt: write a narrative story

Poof bang   batman hits the joker. I will be back with my big monster’’ said joker. ‘’Robin come in come in man my signal is not working i`ll just have to walk back home’’ said batman. ‘’Robin i'm home where are you come on we have to go the joker is gonna bring his big monster robin there you are what happened’’ said batman the joker destroyed the secret layer aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa screamed the people outside joker has brought his big monster it's up to me and you robin’’ said batman.

‘’Joker stop this right now’’ said robin. ‘’Or what are you gonna call your mum’’ said joker.  Bang batman hits the monster it falls to the ground  it gets back up robin you take joker i`ll take the monster’’ said batman bang poof smash batman hits the monster. Robin you hold them of i'm gonna open the portal’’ said batman ‘’on it’’ said robin. Move out of the way the portal is opening now’’ said batman.

Poof bang boom smash joker and his big monster gets suked in a portal. By by said batman and robin then it was back to peace and Quiet streets of gotham city. Bang poof smash ‘’haaa what was that i don't want to fight again’’ said batman. ‘’It was just a robber’’ oh that's ok. The end

Task description: in room ten we have been writing about superhero today we had to finish off our writing our writing from Monday how we did this task was we had to chose a character and chose a place and then we chose a problem. then you start writing about your own superhero story.