Wednesday, 31 August 2016

pick a path presentation by De Niro

Walt: write multiple endings to a story.

Task Description: Click the links in this presentation and it will take you to a slide.

pick a path

Walt: write multiple endings to a story.
Once upon a time there was a guy named fin that could see danger from far away And a dog named jake that could talk and smell danger from far away. Jake would always like to play card game`s with fin but fin would aways say no, fin would say no because jake would away`s win he only win`s because jake played it sint`s he was 5 so he would away`s win.

One day they both heard a big loud scream aaaaaaaaaaaa help us are house`s are is on fire ‘Dont worry we`ll help you right jake’ said fin ‘you go ahead i think i`ll stay here’ said jake tiredly ‘come on we have to save people’ said fin angry.

Decision 1: Jake get`s up and help`s fin
Decision 2: sit`s around here like a baby.

‘Find i`m coming but only for a little while’ said jake ‘Ok’ said fin ‘holy moly said fin and jake were gonna need bucket of water to that fire out a full bucket’ said jake.  

‘Ok so here`s the plan Jake you go and find some water to put the fire out i`ll save the people’ said fin ‘onit’ said jake LET`S DO THIS fin saves all the people and jake was just in time to put the fire out But when Jake almost threw all the water at the fire fin and jake heard a loud HELP I`M TRAPED said the last person in the fire ‘a oh’ said fin and jake ‘Hold on we`ll get you out right jake’ said fin.

Decision 1: Fin makes jake help him save the person.
Decision 2: jake helps him without fin making him help him.

‘Fin you save the person we`ll i get some more water there`s only half a bucket of water now’ said jake ‘ok’ said fin. ‘Hold on i`m coming’ said fin ‘ok’ said the person ‘got you now let`s get out of this fire’ said fin great just in time jake we needed that water wsssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhh the fire went out.

‘Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahoooooooooooooooooooooo fin and jake saved the day again’ said the little people thankyou fin and jake for puting out the fire and savind us but how are we gonna fix our house`s ‘Don`t worry all of you can live with me and jake thank you fin’ said one little person’ your we`ll come’ said fin and jake ‘Now let`s get some hot chocolate’ said fin ‘yeeeeeeaaaaaah’ said the little people.The End Task Description: If you wanna some exciting writing then simply go to my pick a path story.

Tuesday, 30 August 2016

Advice by De NIro

Walt: synthesise information from multiple sources

Task Description: If eneone needs advice come me De Niro Elliott i will give the advice ever.

Wednesday, 17 August 2016

The Flapping race.

Walt: share our writing on our blogs in interesting ways.

The flapping race
By De Niro

The moment I walk into my class room i saw the weirdest thing ever my literacy class was closed, I didn't know why Mr Goodwin wrote on the board that the class was closed and had to ask for permission to go in the class room.

Then Mr Goodwin sent us in the class but my group was Ruby`s was my group we were yellow. Then Mr Goodwin told us what we were gonna do, we were going to play a game called the Flapping race.

What we all had to do was all the reading groups had to stand on a coloured peace of paper and the colour`s were yellow/red/ pink/ green/ blue Then we had to Stand on the peaces of paper and on our tv was yellow/red/pink/green/blue dot`s on the scream Then we count down from 3 And then flap our arm`s like a chicken and the dot`s would because the camera would pick up the movement.

At the end the screen will say who won and who didn't. After all of us had a turn It was time for the final people to flap like a chicken dun dun dun. The people were going to the final`s were Jhyvarntreh/ Henerangi/ Naomi D/ Makayla/ Josh. At the end Naomi-D won and all the other people lost`s Naomi-D won a block of chocolate the we all had to write about it which we are now.

Thursday, 4 August 2016

FiaFia Story

Walt: use a plan when writing.

If you liked this presentation and would like to hear the whole story, read my full story at the link below!

Task Description: Using the plan Mr Goodwin gave us I wrote this story. I used descriptive words, and checked my sentences.