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Friday, 31 March 2017

The red back

Walt: write narrative using descriptive language.

One day a spider was looking for food for its family well the spider was walking he saw a mantis the spider fan as fast as he can so the mantis couldn't get away the spider raped his legs around the mantis the mantis bites the spider the spider pokes the matis in the back then they here a loud stomp and they looked in the bushes and saw a big big big red back spider the redback pokes them both with his poisonous stinger. They both fall too the ground.
Then the Red back drags the spider and mantis then the red back has a fest on the spider and the mantis.





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