I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teacher is Mrs Yandall.
Friday, 15 April 2016
end of blog posting for 2 weeks.
VDear fans I`m sorry that i'm not going to be blog posting for 2 week`s because today is the last day. So i won't be seeing you for 2 week`s see you on monday the 1st of may. By see you in 2 wee
Thursday, 31 March 2016
My camp recount by deniro
walt: recount about camp.
When i was at camp i did lots of cool things like (top town) (making camp bread) and burning marshmallows on the fire that me and my friends made. We had lots of fun the next day we to pools we diden`t need to have lessons we could just swim around. after the pools we had lunch then all our groups went to the hall and played basket ball and jump on the mini trap land on the big mat. the next day all our groups went to papakura pools it was lots of fun but we dident get to go the the slide. after that we went back to school and whatch a movie then waited for our perants to picked all of us up. then the bell rang then all of us could go home that was the best camp ever.
Task dicscription: in my class we all hade to write a recount about camp.
When i was at camp i did lots of cool things like (top town) (making camp bread) and burning marshmallows on the fire that me and my friends made. We had lots of fun the next day we to pools we diden`t need to have lessons we could just swim around. after the pools we had lunch then all our groups went to the hall and played basket ball and jump on the mini trap land on the big mat. the next day all our groups went to papakura pools it was lots of fun but we dident get to go the the slide. after that we went back to school and whatch a movie then waited for our perants to picked all of us up. then the bell rang then all of us could go home that was the best camp ever.
Task dicscription: in my class we all hade to write a recount about camp.
Friday, 18 March 2016
little bad riding hood
Walt: retelling the story little red riding hood in a twist.
In a far away place there lived a big good wolf. One day he was picking some strawberries for his sweet old granny wolf. His dad was also baking some cookies for Granny. So he set off to his sweet old grannies cave but while he was walking he heard something rustling coming from the thick green bushes.
Get out of my way said the wolf. he got to his grandma's house he knocked on the door the door open when he got inside he recognised something. He thought it was little bad riding hood he said to his grandma what small hands you have granny the better to hold my tea cups And what small teeth you have the better to take little bits of my food my dear but then he saw that she had no tale your not my granny your little bad riding hood he screamed daaaaaaaaaaaaaaad his dad rushed out into the woods he saw him and when he got to him he saw that little bad riding hood was trying to kill him.
His dad ate little bad riding hood. The end
Task Description: In room 10 all my class where making a twist story about little red riding hood. My story was about the big good wolf and little bad riding hood.
In a far away place there lived a big good wolf. One day he was picking some strawberries for his sweet old granny wolf. His dad was also baking some cookies for Granny. So he set off to his sweet old grannies cave but while he was walking he heard something rustling coming from the thick green bushes.
It was the Little Bad Riding Hood. She jump out of the bushes and scared him. can i take a look in that basket she said no you can not take a look but why said little bad riding hood because you might steal my strawberries and my cookies that my dad baked.
Get out of my way said the wolf. he got to his grandma's house he knocked on the door the door open when he got inside he recognised something. He thought it was little bad riding hood he said to his grandma what small hands you have granny the better to hold my tea cups And what small teeth you have the better to take little bits of my food my dear but then he saw that she had no tale your not my granny your little bad riding hood he screamed daaaaaaaaaaaaaaad his dad rushed out into the woods he saw him and when he got to him he saw that little bad riding hood was trying to kill him.
His dad ate little bad riding hood. The end
Task Description: In room 10 all my class where making a twist story about little red riding hood. My story was about the big good wolf and little bad riding hood.
Wednesday, 9 March 2016
Wednesday, 17 February 2016
James and Jess
Walt: understand the features of narrative writing. |
Once upon a time there was a boy named James. One day James was so excited because he was going to see his sister jess she was coming home from her grandma's house. When got back They did lots things that she didn't like. The next day she was going to tell james that she doesn't like his games but then james herd what jess said so then james felt sad. The next day james wouldn't come out of his room. jess said to james what's the matter said jess james said you he said what did i do said jess you said that you don't like my games i'm so sorry about that i didn't mean that ok i will come out so then james and jess lived happily ever after.
Task Description: For this task we had to pick a character, setting, and problem and write a short story.
Monday, 23 November 2015
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